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BIZMARK_16 #1 Posted 04 April 2019 - 12:25 PM

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7FEE5444-EBF3-4718-AD93-08BEA442FF8C.jpegso what do you think and what should I improve on

Jigabachi #2 Posted 04 April 2019 - 04:23 PM

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I'm not really a fan of that kind of kiddy weeb art, but... well. Looks good. But the textiles need a bit more work. Compared to the rest, they look rather unfinished.
And with that kind of off-center placement, I always like to see something happening in the background to balance out everything happening in the corner. Even if it's just a bit shading.

Also, a bit of more defined (less blur, sharper edges) shine/lighting to some (metal) surfaces like the shoulder armor (?) or the gunjaw thingy would be nice.

The lower hand looks a bit big and its pose looks rather unnatural. 

Head and scarf look really nice. Overall pose and body, too.


Edited by Jigabachi, 05 April 2019 - 12:09 AM.


Laatikkomafia #3 Posted 04 April 2019 - 05:19 PM

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Is that Tristana?

 

As for what to add: Color.



kaneloon #4 Posted 04 April 2019 - 05:23 PM

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View PostLaatikkomafia, on 04 April 2019 - 04:19 PM, said:

Is that Tristana?

 

As for what to add: Color.

 

Jinx probably ...
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We will know with the colors ... but that crazy maniac smile is more like Jinx.

Laatikkomafia #5 Posted 04 April 2019 - 05:28 PM

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View Postkaneloon, on 04 April 2019 - 06:23 PM, said:

 

Jinx probably ...
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We will know with the colors ... but that crazy maniac smile is more like Jinx.

 

I thought it was inspired by Dragon Trainer Tristana. monkaS

 



Nishi_Kinuyo #6 Posted 04 April 2019 - 06:19 PM

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Oh please, it is obviously some enemy from Kantai Collection, although I forgot which particular one.

Some destroyer perhaps?



BIZMARK_16 #7 Posted 05 April 2019 - 12:54 PM

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View PostNishi_Kinuyo, on 04 April 2019 - 06:19 PM, said:

Oh please, it is obviously some enemy from Kantai Collection, although I forgot which particular one.

Some destroyer perhaps?

 

It’s Battleship RE-class

BIZMARK_16 #8 Posted 05 April 2019 - 10:09 PM

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835C73FE-3357-4CEF-B18F-08F8979EC414.jpeg1E38CF1A-FEC0-4E0C-B2BA-564F88C66AB6.jpegI actually have some more art what do you think (I think I’m a weeb by now I’ve done 400+ arts of kancolle and Azur lane )

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